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In many parts of the world, there is not enough food for everyone. What do you think are the causes of this? What solution can you suggest?

#parts #world #food
In
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this
 time a
lot
 of
people
 are questioning
about
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life, some life
rules
, reasons for poverty and hunger, globalization and many other things. Some of us live in a really beautiful world with different opportunities for applying to good universities, finding
a
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good
job
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jobs
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, and
traveling
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.
On the other hand
, at
this
 moment a
lot
 of
people
 live in really harsh conditions where they don’t allow themselves enough water or food.
One
 cause of hunger is
lack
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the lack
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 of uniform order in the
state
. When the
state
 doesn’t have at least three branches of power, which provide some
rules
 and work together, we can’t call it the
state
.
The
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state
 without
rules
, laws and help for citizens is just
a
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land.
This
 problem started from that time when
people
 realized that they should unite, make decisions together and choose the government which will provide their views and desires into reality for a good future. There are a
lot
 of
countries
 with good land, nature and fresh water for growing various
products
, but they don’t accomplish it without
rules
 and strategy. Because all of us need cooperation, support and the right direction, that gives us an ordinary
state
. Just as
people
 need to unite and cooperate,
countries
 need each other. Perhaps the most important cause of
lack
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 of food for everyone is
improper
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the improper
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 distribution of
products
 and logistics.
This
 cause starts from sanctions
which
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that
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 other
countries
 provide and problems with export and import.
For example
,
one
country
 can grow a
lot
 of different fruits and vegetables, but these
products
 are always sent to other
countries
 and citizens receive nothing.
Moreover
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 there are no redistributed benefits and compensation.
Also
 if
one
country
 is under sanctions, local residents do not receive imported
products
 or other
products
, especially when
this
country
 produces almost nothing itself. In my opinion, the main solution to
this
 problem is the unification of
countries
 and mutual assistance.
One
country
 can share with other
countries
 necessary goods and receive something special from them as well. When governments and authorities realize that we can live in peace and mutual aid, perhaps all
people
 in the world will be able to get enough food, water and other important things.
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