Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevent examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The

sugar

content in packaged food and drink

products

is seriously high which leads depreciation of health.

While

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some

people

might think that making sweet edibles more expensive would force

people

to consume

sugar

in a controlled way.

However

, I would disagree with it

due to

many reasons.

Firstly

, eating

sugar

-rich food gives out a sense of pleasure to the brain which makes it extremely difficult to resist the urge to consume

sugar

.

This

implies that raising the price will not help, as

people

would continue to pay more for same the sugary

products

.

Secondly

,

people

are not aware of the fact that many

companies

add excessive

sugar

to their

products

to improve the flavour and attract more consumers .

lastly

, a manufacturer would do anything to retain existing and attract new customers

For example

,

fruit

juice manufacturing

companies

blend

fruit

and extract all the moisture from it. Doing so will results in a thick pulpy paste of the

fruit

and

this

paste can be stored for months or even a year without it going bad.

Due to

this

process most of the nutrients and taste are lost, to compensate for

this

loss,

companies

add artificial sweeteners or

sugar

to make it taste better. In the

last

,stage they mix the

fruit

paste with preservatives and water.

Then

they package and sell them as real

fruit

juice. In a nutshell, I can say that many

companies

add more

sugar

than required which results in

people

being affected by diabetes and other diseases. But

people

still buy these

products

because they are not aware of these facts.