More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list.  What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is true that a lot of

animals

living in the wild are

edge

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of disappearance. There are several possible reasons but enough measures could be taken to

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address

this

problem. Regarding the causes, there

mainly

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two serious factors which are urging

this

development to appear. The most important reason is illegal hunting. Explain, poachers want

earning

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more money by hunting

of

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animals

.

For instance

, nowadays a

result

of using

elephant's

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costs as making

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a

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handle

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for expensive swords or

knifes

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.

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Furthermore

, another reason is chopping

more

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down more

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forests. Explain, these days production's and

construction's

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developing demand more

resourse

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resources

resource

.

For example

, mainly building

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materials

is wood, for

this

30

percentage

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of forest chope only for building.

As a

result

,

animals

are losing their living area.

Although

the above-mentioned problems are serious enough, several initiatives can

identified

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to tackle

this

problematic situation. Banning

of

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apply

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illegal hunting may be considered

as

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a feasible solution at

this

point. Banning

of

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apply

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illegal hunting by rules may

be

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lead

stopping

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preacher's activity.

Result

of banning we may

be save

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from losing

of

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apply

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animals

cause of

people

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impact.

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receiving to "

redbook

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" list of

extencion

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extension

animals

. Another

vialable

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viable

valuable

measure is to create protected forests and

area

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.

Furthemore

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Furthermore

controlling

animals

to do

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not give damage each

others

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.

As a

result

,

animals

have

comfortable

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a comfortable

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place to increase their amount. In conclusion, a number of factors are playing a vital role in more wild

animals

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animals'

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extintioning

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petitioning

.

However

, effective strategies are available to

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this

case into a

postive

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positive

side.