Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter-Your reason for writing, What you would like to happen. A nice, respectful style

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Dear sir I am

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you know about the problem which I faced two days ago.It is about your pet who is barking

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two days. I ,Ranjit

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who lives in your next door.

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two days I feel so much

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your pet barking

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important examination which will decide my next job. I have to face

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a week and it's

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to concentrate on my study. Not only that,My little son who is only 2 years feels so

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that he could not sleep. Could you please make some

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or I guess, there is some health with

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with your pet.You may take him to visit a doctor. Thanks for your understanding and support.

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faithfully, Ranjit Your Neighbour.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

133 words

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