the charts gives the information about two ggenre of tv shows watched by men and women and 4 diferent age groups in australia.
The
Graph
below states the two
categories of television shows that is
being watched by males and females of different age
group
in Australia. The percentage of population
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the population
are
represented on the left side of the chart and the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
group
of people
with their age
lies on the bottom axis.
Here we see there are two
graphs given at the bottom with the information given on the two
axis
. The Change to a plural noun
axes
two
most watched genres are reality shows and game shows which people
in Australia love to watch. The age
group
on the horizontal plane ranges from 16 to 45+ years
old for both the sex. On the other hand
the
, the percentage goes from 0-80.
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Graph
A gives us the details on the reality show; it suggests that women are more interested in
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the
men with Correct article usage
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approximation
of 35%. Add an article
an approximation
the approximation
Graph
follows the ascending form which gives an idea that Add an article
The graph
people
with
the Change preposition
in
age
group
16-24 years
nearly (52%) are less likely to see this
sort of Program than the age
group
of
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years
and above with
almost (69%). But if we talk about the Change preposition
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group
of people
with the ages between (25-34, 35
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and 35
years
) seems
quite close (60% and 63%) respectively.
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seem
Whereas
, in graph
second both the sex shows almost same
interest Correct article usage
the same
for
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in
this
particular show ie; game shows. People
with
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the
younger Correct article usage
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age
(16-24 years
with 51%) and one with late middle age
(45 and more years
with nearly 69.5%) are fonder of these shows. However
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population
(25-34 and 35-44 Fix the agreement mistake
populations
years
of age
38%, 40% respectively) have less attraction for the same.Submitted by Leena Kapoor on
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