It is difficult for people living in cities today get enough physical exercise. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve the problem

In big

cities

skyscrapers are increasing enormously ,

,

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meanwhile

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people

lose their place for physical

exercise

.I think the government should have an eye on that issue and

people

can go to the

gym

centres for

exercise

. In

this

era of technology, the tower block number is flourished hugely in big

cities

, which occupy most of the free areas in town .

In other words

, the city is the central point for all facilities, where

people

from the countryside move to

cities

for education,medical , transportation and so on .Because of that skyscrapers ratio has grown up every year eloquently.

That is

why

cities

people

have fewer places for

exercise

.

For example

,I live in Sylhet and

can't barely

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find any place for

exercise

because everywhere I go there would be a building or construction work is ongoing.In the afternoon we have no space for playing outdoor games.Paramountly, its effect our body and mind. To overcome

this

issue , the government should take some necessary steps.

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administration

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to create a free park where

people

can go and walk or

exercise

.

Apart from

this

, how to

exercise

by seating at a home program like that might be another good option.

Moreover

,individuals can go to a

gym

in the nearest

gym

centre.

For instance

, every day I devoted one hour to

exercise

in the

gym

centre.Where I see

people

from my area

also

join in

this

. I believe that

people

should

exercise

in every possible way because it helps them to fit in physically and mentally . In conclusion, the major reason behind losing free

area

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for

exercise

is the growing number of big buildings.Management should take the necessary steps as soon as possible and we can do

exercise

in our home or by joining a

gym

centre .