You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 word

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Dear Mr Collins, I am writing

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letter in regard to an advertisement that you have given in the weekly magazine

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week . I would prefer

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babysitter

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because I have done my master's in Pediatrics and child psychology back in India .So it would help me to accomplish my experience in my field

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. To elaborate on why I am appropriate for

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, I would say , I have vast knowledge about child behavioural patterns and their nutritional requirements .

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, I have experience in the same field for more than two years as I was working with an organisation that cares for children in the aspect of their mental and physical development .

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, I have heard from my friend about the spellbinding sights and scenic beauty of different places in Australia.

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, if I would have the chance to pursue my

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there it would fulfil my two desires of working in my interested

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exploring new places . To add on , my cousin is

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living there , so in my vacant time from my work I would spend my time with her . I will look forward to your reply .Please feel free to contact me if you need any details. yours sincerely, Sandeep

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