Write a letter to your college administration department complaining about the college facility. In your letter, include: what the problem is how this problem has affected you what the college should do to fix this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a third-year computer science student in your prestigious college and I am writing
this
letter with regard to a few problems that I have encountered several times over the past few weeks in our college library and canteen area. In relation to the specifics of the first problem, the only photocopier machine that we have in our library was out of order for the past week.
Hence
, we often need to travel to the nearest market for any photocopy requirement and it kills out our valuable time.
Moreover
, our college canteen no longer serves healthy diet food.
Also
, proper hygiene is not maintained in the kitchen section of
this
cafeteria
due to
this
, I have had severe stomach pain
last
week. I had to visit a doctor and the test report shows food poisoning. I suspect
this
same fate waited for some other students who ate in
this
canteen
last
week. I hope you can imagine the difficulty we all are going through. I would greatly appreciate it if you can pay your kind attention and take prompt action regarding
this
. Yours faithfully, Chirag
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