Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people assert that
children
whose Use synonyms
families
are not relatively wealthy can prepare to handle issues of adult life more than those whose Use synonyms
families
are rich. Is there any merit to Use synonyms
this
belief? There are two reasons to support Linking Words
this
idea: Linking Words
firstly
, Linking Words
children
whose Use synonyms
families
are not rich can learn how to cope with difficulties and Use synonyms
secondly
, their mentality would be tougher than Linking Words
children
who are brought up in wealthy Use synonyms
families
.
First of all, we must recognize that Use synonyms
children
whose Use synonyms
families
have financial problems are likely to handle many things by themselves. These can include not household or making money from a part-time job for their tuition. By way of an example, young people who regularly engage themselves in working are able to gain practical Use synonyms
skills
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such
as problem-solving Linking Words
skills
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According to
an article in the Asahi Shimbun newspaper published by Linking Words
last
month, eight out of ten Japanese adults who have experienced hard times Linking Words
due to
the fact that their Linking Words
families
had financial problems, answered that obtaining the above-mentioned Use synonyms
skills
in their early time Use synonyms
were
helpful when they were in complicated situations. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Therefore
, they may be able to learn how to deal with problems easily through having tough moments in their youth.
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Secondly
, since childhood growing up in Linking Words
families
that do not have large amounts of funds have to be patient in many kinds of circumstances, which enables their mentality to become strong. In fact, research recently conducted by The University of Tokyo discovered that adults who have faced tough situations are capable of building stronger minds which is the key factor to overcoming difficulties in their lives. If you had not had Use synonyms
such
an experience, it would have been more complicated to overcome issues. As Linking Words
such
, youth living in low-income Linking Words
families
provides people to get mindset which is useful in complicated situations.
In conclusion, there are significant benefits to growing up in Use synonyms
families
whose incomes are low Use synonyms
such
as improving practical Linking Words
skills
and having Use synonyms
good
mentality to solve issues. We must consider these advantages.Correct article usage
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