The Chart Below Gives Information About How Families In One Country Spent Their Weekly Income In 1968 And In 2018
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provided static demonstrates comparing spending on certain things between 2 generations, who separated by 5 decades.
According to
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,diagram 1968’s people’s biggest expense was food, and in 2018’s leisure.
On the other ,hand minimum flows average weekly income of people in 1968 was fuel and power, which decreased even more in 2018 by 3-4%!
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clothing and footwear for 5% , and almost in a
same way personal goods by 6% in 2018.
Contrariwise housing, leisure average weekly income increased almost by two times!Housing from 10% to 18% and leisure from 8% to 23%.
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can find a fact that Household goods haven’t changed during this
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