The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table describes information about expenditures on various items in 5 Europe
Countries
in 2002.
It is clear the biggest expenditures from all the countries
are food, drink and tobacco. On the other hand
, leisure and education are the lowest percentages where people in those countries
spend their money.
As per the table, the highest expenditure of Italian people is fashion items, the percentage is 9.00%. On the contrary
Sweden’s citizen just spend their funds 5.40%.
In spite of the percentages of expenditures of Ireland, Turkey and Spain being almost the same, they are around 6%.
Furthermore
, Turkey is a country that spends money on meals, beverages and tobacco. It is 32.14%. Then
following by Ireland with 28,91%. While
Italian people just release cash on those things, it is 16.36%. However
, Turkey put bigger of their funding into education and leisure than other countries
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