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Some people think hard work and determination are important to get success. Others think money and personal appearance is more important. Discuss and give opinion

#people #work #determination #success #money #appearance
Achieving our desired goals in
life
 is an essential part of human existence
therefore
, a lot of factors are needed in order to attain these goals and avoid failures. These determinants include factors
such
 as diligence, perseverance, finances and outward look.
While
 some individuals are
of
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the thought that working hard and being determined are the necessary attributes needed to be successful others are of the opinion that funds and body image have
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 influence in achieving success. Regardless of these opinions, I would say that all these factors have their roles in helping individuals achieve good outcomes.
Firstly
, being diligent and persevering in any sphere of
life
 have been known to equip individuals with mastery. With consistent exposure and participation in any form of trade,
people
 learn almost every detail about the trade and
also
 avoid failures
due to
 the level of expertise they have gained.
For example
, students who diligently study consistently often attain academic success
while
 the reverse is the case for those who do
otherwise
.
In addition
, not being slothful with one's duty promotes creativity. When
people
 constantly engage in work, there is an associated brain and mind involvement which means that there is continuous interaction between these two aspects of
life
 and
as a result
 imaginations and new ideas are birthed. An example can be seen among research scientists.
On the other hand
, funds and physical looks
promotes
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 better interaction with other
people
. Despite the importance of hard work and consistency, social relationships greatly affect the ability of an
endeavor
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 to be successful and because of
this
, the way
people
 appear and the finances they have may positively or negatively influence their success rate. An illustration of
this
 is seen among employees who are meant to dress properly and have some financial support in order to have access to their clients. In summary, working hard, being consistent, having some financial leverage and dressing properly all contribute to obtaining good results in any field of
life
 and I think they all should be put
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 use equally.
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