Some people think hard work and determination are important to get success. Others think money and personal appearance is more important. Discuss and give opinion

Achieving our desired goals in

life

is an essential part of human existence

therefore

, a lot of factors are needed in order to attain these goals and avoid failures. These determinants include factors

such

as diligence, perseverance, finances and outward look.

While

some individuals are

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the thought that working hard and being determined are the necessary attributes needed to be successful others are of the opinion that funds and body image have

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influence in achieving success. Regardless of these opinions, I would say that all these factors have their roles in helping individuals achieve good outcomes.

Firstly

, being diligent and persevering in any sphere of

life

have been known to equip individuals with mastery. With consistent exposure and participation in any form of trade,

people

learn almost every detail about the trade and

also

avoid failures

due to

the level of expertise they have gained.

For example

, students who diligently study consistently often attain academic success

while

the reverse is the case for those who do

otherwise

.

In addition

, not being slothful with one's duty promotes creativity. When

people

constantly engage in work, there is an associated brain and mind involvement which means that there is continuous interaction between these two aspects of

life

and

as a result

imaginations and new ideas are birthed. An example can be seen among research scientists.

On the other hand

, funds and physical looks

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better interaction with other

people

. Despite the importance of hard work and consistency, social relationships greatly affect the ability of an

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to be successful and because of

this

, the way

people

appear and the finances they have may positively or negatively influence their success rate. An illustration of

this

is seen among employees who are meant to dress properly and have some financial support in order to have access to their clients. In summary, working hard, being consistent, having some financial leverage and dressing properly all contribute to obtaining good results in any field of

life

and I think they all should be put

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use equally.