The Importance of biodiversity is being recognised numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity ?

The biodiversity
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Biodiversity
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is essential to protect an endangered
species
. I believe to maintain ecosystem
life
, the solutions that can be implemented,
consisting
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consist
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of nature preservation and wildlife
conservation
.
Initially
, maintaining the original
habitat
of rare
species
become
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becomes
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the
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a
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good way to keep and increase the population
both
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of both
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fauna and flora.
This
is because the natural habit might be threatened since many humankind
disturb
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disturbs
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the ecosystem
life
in
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the forest
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forest
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forests
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, doing the illegal logging or hunting
the
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apply
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certain
animals
. In order to prevent
from
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apply
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the
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apply
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dangerous
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because of irresponsible people, the government give an
officially
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official
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warning if some
of
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apply
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forests
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the forests
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are protected .
Furthermore
, implementing
of
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apply
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punishment for people to do the
illegal
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illegally
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one and destroy the
habitat
life
in woodland,
it
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apply
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is
being
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apply
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the alternative solution for keeping it
safely
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safe
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.
For instance
, giving a sign in around
of
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apply
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kalungkung
forest
with
a
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the
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title "do not enter
in
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apply
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the
forest
without
an
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apply
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official permission,
this
kalungkung
forest
is protected by the
Indonesia
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Indonesian
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Government". Another activity, there are the guardian stay in
kalungkung
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the kalungkung
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forest
to keep security, so there are no illegal
hunter
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hunters
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or animal
hunter
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hunters
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coming to it.
Moreover
, another solution is securing
the
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apply
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endangered animal
species
to
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for
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wildlife
conservation
. Why
this
is notable to do
this
conservation
is
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apply
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because many rare
animals
are not finding
the
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a
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habitat
to live
;
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in; food
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food
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or food
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sources and do not find their folk of
animals
special. The policy maker
along with
the stakeholder collaborates to cope with
this
problem by shaping the team or community to
looking
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look
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for some
animals
trethened
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strengthened
tethered
in some places and put them into the near location of animal
conservation
.
For example
, Komodo is one of the
animal
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animals
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being extinct
from
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in
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Indonesia. To keep their population, the government build the National Park of Komodo in Nusa Tenggara Timur, Indonesia.
In addition
, the local leader in
this
region,
have
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has
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a community to find other komodo
species
in some places to bring them
in
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into
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the
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apply
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animal
conservation
.
To conclude
,
although
many problems
causing
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cause
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ecosystem
life
is
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to be
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endangered, the solutions can be done by the authorities are
doing
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apply
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the preservation of original
habitat
in the
forest
and
also
collecting the extinct
animals
to
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in
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the close wildlife
conservation
region
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