The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts percentage the of water usage in six different nations (Canada, United Kingdom, China, Australia, India, and Japan) in 2003 for three different purposes domestic, industrial, and agricultural. In general, it is more than clear agriculture
use
has high figures from other categories
use
.
On the other hand
, industrial purposes are less than a per cent,
moreover
, Australia takes the lowest number in the table.
Therefore
, the only United Kingdom overtaken 80% in agricultural
use
,
in addition
, has the same percentage in domestic and industrial around 5%.
Whereas
Canada and Australia’s water
use
in domestic approximate percentage, different between them minus two figures.
Finally
, water usage for agricultural purposes reached its peak,
then
industrial come in second
center
Change the spelling
centre
show examples
,
then
domestic took
last
in order for ratio.
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