The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
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The line graph illustrates the demand for
electricity
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in England during common days in
winter
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and
summer
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,
while
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the pie chart gives information about the consuming
electricity
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in a casual English house.
Overall
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, from the line graph and pie
chart
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it can be seen that Englishman use
electricity
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more commonly in
winter
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than in
summer
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and they employ it mostly for heating rooms and water. The daily demand for
electricity
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is more than 30 000 units in
winter
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and it reaches a peak between 21 and 24 o`clock,
although
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in
summer
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the consumption is lower than 20 000 units. So that it can be seen from both in
winter
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and
summer
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people tend to use
electricity
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rarely in the early mornings and it increases
at the end
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of the day. The pie chart depicts that more than half of all
electricity
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is consumed for warming houses and water to use,
whereas
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17,5 per cent of
electricity
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is used for ovens, kettles and washing machines.
Then
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, the rest of it divides equally for employing lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers,
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electricity
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and electricity
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tools.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, winter, summer with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demand for electricity
  • typical days
  • line graph
  • seasonal variation
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • exceeds
  • units of electricity
  • distribution of electricity usage
  • heating
  • water heating
  • combined total
  • major uses
  • lighting
  • ovens
  • kettles
  • washing machines
  • miscellaneous appliances
  • electronics
  • total usage
  • account for
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