some people believe that government should take care of elder people while others argue that its individual responsibility. discuss both the views and opinion

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some
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believe that
government
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should take
care
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of elder
people
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while
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others
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argue that its individual
responsibility
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. discuss
both
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the
views
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and
opinion
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some
people
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believe that
government
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should take
care
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of elder
people
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while
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others
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argue that its individual
responsibility
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. discuss
both
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the
views
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and
opinion
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some
people
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believe that
government
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should take
care
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of elder
people
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while
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others
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argue that its individual
responsibility
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. discuss
both
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the
views
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and
opinion
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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