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In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their kids when women work full time. What are the reasons? It is a positive or negative development?

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 usually academy and they have a kid so it is the responsibility of her husband to look after him so, in offices no one
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 care of his children . It is the duty of a man to look after his wife with their son .
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 .but it is the responsibility of them both
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Primary breadwinner
  • Gender roles
  • Primary caregiver
  • Child development
  • Emotional well-being
  • Parental leave policies
  • Work-life balance
  • Gender stereotypes
  • Inclusive policies
  • Financial strain
  • Economic roles
  • Societal norms
  • Prohibitively high
  • Diverse role models
  • Fostering equality
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