People nowadays spend their free time less actively than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, a debate regarding the sports activity of people emerged.

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, many people argue that, in the past, individuals were more active,

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nowadays it happens less. I partially disagree with

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that now there are more ways to pass

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essay, a brief explanation of the matter will be given. It is undoubtedly true that, in our times, there is an increasing amount of non-active hobbies. In

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, with the availability of new technologies, many people, especially the younger generations, tend to spend

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playing video games or simply surfing the internet.

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, the increased offer of films and

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series at every

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of the day, thanks to streaming platforms, is playing a role in shifting people’s habits. At the same

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, the rate of overweight children is rising and

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could be linked to these new hobbies, which are making them less active.

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, it should be noted that in the past not only there were ways to inactively pass

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greatly spread among the population. In

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, technology has only substituted some other hobbies of the past,

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as table games or card games.

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, the rates of children that are now part of a sports club are similar, if not greater, compared to the past.

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, in my city, football teams are starting to struggle to keep up with all the new subscriptions, and

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can be proof of an incremented involvement of younger generations in sports.

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, the observed increased amount of overweight children could be more a consequence of negative diets. In conclusion, I think that there is no reason to

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about levels of physical activity. As stated above, the possible reduction is only an impression and other factors suggest that, in

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, it is not true.

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, it is true that new technologies can pose a risk in

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sense,

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the phenomenon should be accurately monitored.