The chart shows monthly retail sales of different kinds of the stores in the USA last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reportign the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the previous
year
how much millions of dollars were spent on retail sales of hobby
, shoes and bookstores in the USA.
Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
Overall
, Shoe stores
were the leader in sales the whole year
and hobby
stores
were the second
one at the end
of the year
. Bookstoresstores were the second
one at the beginning and in the middle of the year
but over time they fell down to the third position.
In the first half of the year
, Shoe stores
had a huge lead on the market with nearly 3000 million
dollars. Bookstores started in the second
position with over 1000 million
and go down to nearly 500 million
in February. Meanwhile, hobby
stores
continue steadily.
In the second
half of the year
, Shoe stores
had a huge increase between July and August. It went up to over 3500 million
at this
time. Then
it had a huge crush in the next month and after that, it reached a peak at the end
of the year
with nearly 4000 million
. Hobby
stores
had a surge in September and over doubled. On the other hand
, Book stores
had an increase in July and after it goes down to the same level as before.Submitted by erenar3 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, hobby, stores, second, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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