Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barrett, Hope you are doing well. I saw your pamphlet in the newspaper that you are looking for someone to help with cooking for 2-3 hours during the upcoming warmer season. I help in making lunch and dinner meals and if I have extra time I will try to take care of your daughter as well. I would be suitable for
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job as I had 4 years of experience as Cheff in Taj Restaurant. As I already passed
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theory exam in order to get coaching for a practical paper I need money.
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would be my best source of extra savings. I am available from 12 pm to 5pm on Weekdays. My Coaching classes are on weekends the best possible time on these days would be after 4 pm. I will be waiting for your response.
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Faithfully, Aanchal
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Cultural immersion
  • Work ethic
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  • Time management
  • Prior commitments
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