The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
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The above bar chart illustrates the production and usage of
electricity
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by 10 countries in decreasing order in the year 2014. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that, The Republic of China is the largest producer and consumer of
electricity
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.
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, it has been observed that the generation of
electricity
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is more than consumption in nine out of ten countries. China is the largest producer of
electricity
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with an estimated generation of 5395 billion kWh followed by the United States of America with slightly above 4000 billion kWh of
electricity
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production.
Then
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the chart follows a decreasing order with the Korean republic standing in the
last
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position. Consumption of
electricity
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also
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follows a similar trend with China being the largest consumer relative to the United States of America. A similar decreasing trend is observed
thereafter
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with an exception of Germany. In the case of utilization, Germany which holds the position of ninth consumes more energy compared to Brazil in the eighth position.
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, Germany is the only nation with
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consumption of energy more than production.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hour (MWh)
  • capacity
  • output
  • distribution
  • consumption
  • production
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • surplus
  • deficit
  • trend
  • pattern
  • discrepancy
  • regional
  • anomaly
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