Write a letter to your friend where describe your favourite film.
Hi Dave
I am happy to write to you again. In
this
letter
I want to tell you about one of my favourite films which I enjoy watching again and again.
The Add a comma
,letter
film
is called "Mimino". I know it sounds strange but in Georgian
it means "falcon". As you already understood the Add a comma
,Georgian
film
is Georgian production. Honestly, it is a Soviet movie but most of the characters are from the Kaukas region and the producers had not any choice when is named it right.
This
film
is about a Georgian man who is a helicopter pilot and helps citizens with transporting sheeps
and cows between villages so far in the mountains. He finds it quite boring and realises that his career is not something that he dreamed about. He decided to try himself on international flights. For Correct your spelling
sheep
this
, he has to go to Moscow (of course, how this
plan could happen without "great capital") and to
ask for an audition directly with a Minister of Aviation. There is a start Fix the infinitive
apply
of
his story.
It is Change preposition
to
very
adventurous story about men's kindness and "system" stupid, honour, and love for motherlands. If my review is not impressed you enough, just find the Add an article
a very
film
and watch it.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
AlexSubmitted by sashko.holodniy on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite