the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site

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The provided maps illustrate the current situation of an industrial region in Norbiton and the planned change of

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site in the future.

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, there will be a big development from converting factories to residential buildings and supporting facilities of modern life. Moving to the details, the factories situated in Norbiton will be changed into housings for citizens where the arrangement of

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building circle a roundabout will be moved to along new streets added to the west and north of

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circular place.

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, there will be the introduction of shops and a medical centre located

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the western and eastern parts of

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roundabout.

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this

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, a playground and school will be erected on the right of a big-circular area where the latter will be

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of the road,

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the former will be between housings alongside the street. Another striking development is farmland previously at

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and middle of the map will be moved to the right side because the building of new streets and bridges

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houses will be introduced in

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place.

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, a new circular area will be built in the south part of a previous roundabout.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

198 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
development
infrastructure
manufacturing
facilities
transition
planning
commercial
residential
renovation
urban planning
sustainability
environmental impact
local economy
rejuvenation
construction
modernization
accessibility
demolition
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the maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site

‎ Some young people leave the countryside to live in cities or towns, leaving only ‎older people in the countryside. What are the problems of this issue? What can ‎be done to solve this problem?‎

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Young people often copy the behaviour of famous people, so celebrities should only be allowed to advertise healthy food or drink and should not encourage unhealthy habits such as smoking. Do you agree or disagree?