The chart below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selelcting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavant.
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the bar graph illustrates the number of graduates who did not get a full-time job after finishing their academics in the year 2008.
Overall
, there are 4 different reasons which are part-time work
, voluntary work
, further
study and unemployment. However
, more people at undergraduate and postgraduate prefer to pursue further
studies and the least is social activities .
According to
the first graph, 17,735 people worked part-time jobs which is
less than the data from postgraduates. For voluntary Change the verb form
are
work
, there are only 3500 students, which is the least proportion preferred by both graduates. 29,665 graduates prefer to pursue higher education. At last
, more than half of the students are unemployed 16,235.
Followed by the second graph, the data is show a similar trend as undergrads. 2,535 postgraduates work
part-time. 345 students are doing voluntary work
. After ,graduation most people prefer to do further
studies 2,725. The unemployment rate is 1625.Submitted by santosh2001kk on
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