The bar chart shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing Certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007
The bar chart illustrates the
hours
each week that adolescents spent on seven activities in Chester between 2002 and 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
watching television was at the highest position, Correct article usage
apply
whereas
the
bowling was at the least position. The percentage of homework and sport decreased,Correct article usage
apply
expect
watching Correct your spelling
except
DVD's
which fluctuated.
The proportion of watching television started at exactly 25 Change noun form
DVDs
hours
in 2002 and in 2007 it was to reach a peak of just over 35 hour
the figure for going to pubs/ discos and shopping began at around Change to a plural noun
hours
5hours
, after which it increased to about 15 Correct your spelling
5 hours
hour
respectively in 2007. The percentage of watching Change to a plural noun
hours
DVD's
fluctuated Change noun form
DVDs
at
over Change preposition
to
10hours
in 2002 and in 2007 it dropped to under 10 Correct your spelling
10 hours
hours
.
While
teenagers occupied to 10 hours
doing homework and sport in 2002, these figures dropped to 5hours
in 2007.Correct your spelling
5 hours
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