The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spent doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.

The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spent doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007.
The bar chart explains how much
time
teenagers
spent doing some activities in Chester between 2002 and 2007. The unit is calibrated in hours per
week
.
Overall
,
teenagers
spend most of their
time
watching television and use the least
time
bowling. It can be seen from the chart that three kinds of activities, namely going to public pubs, watching television and shopping, were shown an increasing trend during the given period and reached a peak in those 2007 data, especially for the number of hours per
week
teenagers
used to watch television which reached more than 35 hours per
week
. Meanwhile, other types of leisure
teenagers
did, including
doing
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homework,
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sports, and bowling, showed a decreasing pattern, especially in 2007 when most
teenagers
only did bowling for around an hour per
week
.
In addition
, in terms of watching DVDs, it can be inferred from the chart that the trend of the total
time
in watching DVDs was oscillating.
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