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The plan before show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The blueprint illustrates the site of an airport today and after its reconstruction by the next year.,
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 it has only 4 main features but after the
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development more features will be added to increase its sufficiency.
Overall
, the re-making of the place will take a year to build it into a far better facility for the population to avail.,
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 it will have a few new services in and around it namely Atm, car hire, bag drop and sky train. Presently, the southwest airport has a small walkway on its north with 8 gates. There are two doors on its south one for departure and the other, for arrival. Heading inside the arrival gate it has a passport control custom department in between the walkway and the entrance.
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, the departure gate has the security passport control room in the middle, coming towards the exit there is one café on its left and check-in on its right. After a
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generation we will see a new sky train provision with an increase no. of doors ie; 18 on its north.
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, there are 2 gates each for excavation and entry. Arrival area will have a car hiring space in the starting,
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 the Atm and
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 a place to eat. The other gate has rearranged the café
initially
 and check-in provision on behalf of the café. A new service for bag drop will be provided after the snack bar. In the
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northwest before the sky trains there will be new space for the shops.
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