You sent some documents by post recently, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter -Give details of the situation -Describe the documents -Say what action you want tobe taken.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with your courier service. I posted my

documents

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to a company in Banglore via your courier service with the booking number 1234.

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, it’s not yet reached the destination and the estimated delivery date is

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crossed two weeks ago. I recently had surgery and raised a

claim

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about the same. The courier consists of various original

documents

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including hospital bills and laboratory reports. These

documents

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contain very sensitive personal health information. These

documents

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must be submitted to the insurer in order to get approval for the

claim

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. I want you to provide me with a detailed reason for causing

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delay with valid proof. As deadlines are already passed and the

claim

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will not get approved even if the

documents

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are delivered, I believe I should not bear the loss because of your mistake and

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, I am asking you to provide me with the full amount that equates to the

claim

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. I can be reached at my email mailto:[email protected] in case you need any other information from me. Yours faithfully, Kishan

kishanpatel2550Fri Mar 03 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

184 words

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You sent some documents by post recently, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter -Give details of the situation -Describe the documents -Say what action you want tobe taken.

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Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?