You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: · describe why you want to take the course · explaining how it will be beneficial to the company · tell who will be managing your work in your absence.

Dear Sales department Manager, I am writing

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letter

with

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regarding

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to

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a course

that is

posted

on

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the commercial advertising, and I would like to request an offer about attending the class.

This

program is about how to create a competitive advantage to attract prospects, and it only opens annually at Langara College. Since the instructor’s reputation is well-known, I believe that the content of the curriculum must be

pragmatically

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. My current position is

a

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sales

association

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, and our current product

are

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not able to meet the expected profit.

Hence

, differentiating merchandise from peers is a primary strategy to apply so as to attract the right target market.

By taking

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this

class, it is a beneficial way for me to analyze our production in terms of identifying our uniqueness. John, a sales assistant,

have

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agreed to accept some essential office process from me, and I will make use of weekends to complete undue tasks.

In addition

, another colleague, Mary is willing to assist me in dealing with

customer

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service

issue

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, so I could two half days to participate in

this

business lecture. I look forward to receiving your response. Kind regards, Claire Chen