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The graph below shows the total revenue of three pizza places in Vietnam. The figures were taken in 2017.

The graph below shows the total revenue of three pizza places in Vietnam. The figures were taken in 2017.
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The given line graph illustrates the information on the total income of three Vietnamese
pizza
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 companies, including
Pizza
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Hut
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,
Domino
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Pizza
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 and The
Pizza
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Company
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, in 2017.
Overall
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, among the three mentioned companies,
Pizza
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Hut
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 had the least revenue
although
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 it had a peak and The
Pizza
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Company
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 was the most valuable
company
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 with the highest revenue throughout the entire year even if the
company
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 had earnings in the low-lying area. It is
also
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 notable that
Domino
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Pizza
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 and The
Pizza
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Company
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 went upward and vice versa
Pizza
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Hut
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 tended to fall down generally. In 2017, The
Pizza
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Company
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 and
Domino
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Pizza
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 had similar downward trends respectively from $34
million
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 and $31
million
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 to $14
million
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 and $11
million
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 in February. Both figures experienced the same fluctuating patterns over the 12-month period, with The
Pizza
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Company
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 reaching a peak in July of over $40
million
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. Both restaurants marginally increased in the remaining months and
at the end
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 of the year, The
Pizza
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Company
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 earned $35
million
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 and
Domino
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Pizza
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 collected $34
million
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 in total sales.
Pizza
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Hut
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,
on the other hand
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, had a much lower share market, beginning at nearly $15
million
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 in January. It experienced slight fluctuations before hitting the lowest earnings in September, approximately $2
million
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. In December 2017,
Pizza
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Hut
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 earned around $3
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, hut, domino, company, million with synonyms.
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