Some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a student’s level. Other people believe that they put unnecessary pressure on young learners and tell us very little about their actual ability. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a discussion that some people believe
exams
are suitable to check a student’s ability while
others assume that it is bringing in significant pressure on children and are unnecessary. Although
exams
could lead skill
development and Change preposition
to skill
being
tough, I think Change the verb form
be
it
will be more detrimental to youngsters because of Correct pronoun usage
they
its
negative impact on Correct pronoun usage
their
self confidence
and Add a hyphen
self-confidence
causing
unhappier Wrong verb form
cause
behavior
.
First of all, taking Change the spelling
behaviour
exams
could benefit children’s skills and teach them ease in a hard situations
. The exam gives the opportunity to children to find their mistakes from it and could improve Correct the article-noun agreement
hard situations
a hard situation
it
based on errorsCorrect pronoun usage
apply
,
since people develop ability by fixing mistakes. In some schools, they take Remove the comma
apply
exams
in
every day, because they consider that it is benefiting their skill day by day. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, taking exams
could make youngsters tougher so that they easily overcome hard events in life, since preparing and taking exams
requires hard work them. There is a quote that when people feels
hard situations at a young age, they will take hard events in their future as simple. Change the verb form
feel
Although
exam brings some benefits like improvement and toughness, it has more drawbacks.
Moreover
, exams
is resulting in unconfidence and unhappiness. Since exams
could not fully assess young students’ abilities, it brings much pressure on kids who got a low scores
. Correct the article-noun agreement
a low score
low scores
As a result
, it makes them unconfident and feel like failures. In their teenage, youngsters take exam scores seriously and compare it
with others. In some countries, students should not be examined until graduation because of its negative result on their behaviour. Correct pronoun usage
them
Additionally
, young learners are in
their playing age and need to spend time with as much as fun. By taking Change preposition
at
exams
in their teenage, children could be raised as bored and sad. They should enjoy and
feel happy Correct pronoun usage
themselves and
instead
of taking exams
.
In conclusion, exams
possible
bring some benefits including skill development and ease; Change the word
possibly
however
, I think it will be more detrimental because of the unconfidence caused by test scores, and the unhappiness with much pressure.Submitted by ganorgil0927 on
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