You recently bought something from a TV home shopping channel. The product that was delivered does not have the same specifications / functions as the one advertised on TV. Write a letter to the TV channel. In your letter; Say why and when you bought the item Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it Say what action you would like them to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the item brought from you on 28th January. Recently, I have seen an advertisement about the fridge on your TV home shopping channel. I liked the quality and functions which were shown by an anchor so I ordered the fridge on 28th January with order number 1234 and received it on 2nd February. Unfortunately, the quality which was promised

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advertising seems to be missing. The product is not durable as it’s shown in the advertisement.

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, there are multiple scratches on the front door and one handle is

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missing.

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, I request you to arrange for a return of the product and refund me the full amount. Please reach out to me before scheduling pick-up to ensure my availability. I can be reached at my email mailto:[email protected]. I hope we can resolve

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matter as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Kishan

kishanpatel2550Fri Mar 03 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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