Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.
My dear Sam,
Hopefully
you are Add a comma
,Hopefully
good
health and spirit. I did n't write Change preposition
in good
you
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to you
since
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for
long
because of my busy Correct article usage
a long
schedual
.I am Correct your spelling
schedule
wtitting
to you to let you know that I have made some Correct your spelling
writing
waiting
a
beautiful Correct article usage
apply
painting
for your new Fix the agreement mistake
paintings
house
.Hey,.
Change the punctuation
,
.
Unfortunately
I could not attend the Add a comma
,Unfortunately
house warming
ceremony Correct your spelling
housewarming
although
I planned to attend it beause
I went out of Correct your spelling
because
the
town for two days for office work.Correct article usage
apply
Although
physically I was not present there but
I was missing the program.
As you know Remove the conjunction
apply
that
from my childhood how much interested I am Correct pronoun usage
apply
for
Change preposition
in
the
art and painting.So Suddenly an idea Correct article usage
apply
come
Change the verb form
comes
in
my mind to draw a painting for your new Change preposition
to
house
specially
for your bedroom.I made a natural Replace the word
especially
seenery
of painting and Correct your spelling
scenery
freamed
it yesterday. I am confident that you will love it.
I know you are excited now to see it.But don't worry about it. My uncle is going to town to bring something for our home for that our big van is going. I asked my uncle to Correct your spelling
framed
dreamed
padd
it to you on the way Correct your spelling
add
pass
of
the town.
I select Change preposition
to
this
art because i
know your choice.Change the capitalization
I
last
time when I draw Correct article usage
The last
same
type of painting for my Change the article
the same
uncles
Change to a genitive case
uncle's
uncles'
house
,you were so much
Correct quantifier usage
apply
interest
to make for you. So I thought why not I draw something Replace the word
interested
similat
to itCorrect your spelling
similar
.
So Change the punctuation
?
i
am sure you will love it.After you get the painting let me know How did you feel Change the capitalization
I
it
.
I Change preposition
about it
lookforward
to hearing from you.
Correct your spelling
look forward
A big
Correct article usage
Big
Hugs
!
Yours
Ranjit.Fix the agreement mistake
Hug
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,