Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.

#friend #house #gift #-describe #-tell #-explain

My dear Sam,

Hopefully

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you are

good

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in good

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health and spirit. I did n't write

you

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to you

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since

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for

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long

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a long

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because of my busy

schedual

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schedule

.I am

wtitting

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writing

waiting

to you to let you know that I have made some

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apply

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beautiful

painting

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paintings

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for your new

house

.Hey

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Unfortunately

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,Unfortunately

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I could not attend the

house warming

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housewarming

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ceremony

although

I planned to attend it

beause

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because

I went out of

the

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apply

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town for two days for office work.

Although

physically I was not present there

but

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apply

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I was missing the program. As you know

that

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apply

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from my childhood how much interested I am

for

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the

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apply

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art and painting.So Suddenly an idea

come

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comes

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my mind to draw a painting for your new

house

specially

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especially

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for your bedroom.I made a natural

seenery

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scenery

of painting and

freamed

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framed

dreamed

it yesterday. I am confident that you will love it. I know you are excited now to see it.But don't worry about it. My uncle is going to town to bring something for our home for that our big van is going. I asked my uncle to

padd

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add

pass

it to you on the way

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the town. I select

this

art because

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know your choice.

last

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The last

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time when I draw

same

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the same

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type of painting for my

uncles

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uncle's

uncles'

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house

,you were so

much

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apply

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interest

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interested

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to make for you. So I thought why not I draw something

similat

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similar

to it

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am sure you will love it.After you get the painting let me know How did you feel

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about it

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. I

lookforward

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look forward

to hearing from you.

A big

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Big

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Hugs

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! Yours Ranjit.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
38Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

253 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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