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Writing Samples
Band 3.5

Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should: -describe the gift -tell how it will be delivered -explain why you chose it.

My dear Sam,
Hopefully
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 you are
good
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in good
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 health and spirit. I did n't write
you
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to you
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since
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for
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long
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a long
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 because of my busy
schedual
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schedule
.I am
wtitting
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writing
waiting
 to you to let you know that I have made some
a
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apply
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beautiful
painting
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paintings
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 for your new
house
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.Hey
,.
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,
.
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Unfortunately
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,Unfortunately
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 I could not attend the
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house warming
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housewarming
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 ceremony
although
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 I planned to attend it
beause
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because
 I went out of
the
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apply
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town for two days for office work.
Although
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 physically I was not present there
but
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I was missing the program. As you know
that
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from my childhood how much interested I am
for
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in
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the
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apply
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art and painting.So Suddenly an idea
come
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comes
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in
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to
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 my mind to draw a painting for your new
house
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specially
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especially
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 for your bedroom.I made a natural
seenery
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scenery
 of painting and
freamed
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framed
dreamed
 it yesterday. I am confident that you will love it. I know you are excited now to see it.But don't worry about it. My uncle is going to town to bring something for our home for that our big van is going. I asked my uncle to
padd
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add
pass
 it to you on the way
of
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to
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 the town. I select
this
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 art because
i
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I
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 know your choice.
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last
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The last
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 time when I draw
same
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the same
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 type of painting for my
uncles
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uncle's
uncles'
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house
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,you were so
much
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apply
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interest
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interested
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 to make for you. So I thought why not I draw something
similat
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similar
 to it
.
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?
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 So
i
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I
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 am sure you will love it.After you get the painting let me know How did you feel
it
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about it
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. I
lookforward
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look forward
 to hearing from you.
A big
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Big
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Hugs
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Hug
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! Yours Ranjit.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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