One of your friend lives in another country. You want to spend time working in that country. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, you should: •describe why you want to work in that country; • tell him/her about your skills and experience; • ask some questions related to work (wage, salary)
My dear Sam,
Hope you
are keep
well.I am Change the verb form
are keeping
writting
to you about my visit to Sydney .I am interested to come to Australia as you are already there Correct your spelling
writing
since
a long Change preposition
for
time
.
last
time
at the time
of your india
visit you were talking about people's life,job opportunity,Change the capitalization
India
education
Correct word choice
and education
of
Australia. I was excited to visit you but waiting Change preposition
in
of
my final examination.Change preposition
for
Last
month my final result had come and I passed in
a high Change preposition
with
distingtion
of Correct your spelling
distinction
mark
.
As you know I just completed my Master of education.I hadAdd an article
the mark
a
wish to go Change the article
the
to
abroad and get Remove the preposition
apply
any
job and earn money and support my dream project of the Orphanage Center.
Apart Correct determiner usage
a
of
My Educational qualification ,I have other skills and certificates Change preposition
from
of
cookery.In the Change preposition
in
biginging
If I am getting a job in a restaurant and earn some money and Correct your spelling
beginning
then
I can go for my higher study as well.
could you please make some inquiry about the wages of that restaurant which is near to your house as you mention
previouslyChange the form of the verb
mentioned
.
Is there any vacancy there which will fit Change the punctuation
?
with
my qualification and experienceChange preposition
apply
.
How many hours can I work? and how to apply?
I would appreciate Change the punctuation
?
if
you can get someCorrect pronoun usage
it if
lisure
Correct your spelling
leisure
time
from your busy and make it.thanks for your understanding and support.
Best Wishes
RanjitSubmitted by saomyakrsna on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.