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Writing Samples
Band 5.5

One of your friend lives in another country. You want to spend time working in that country. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, you should: •describe why you want to work in that country; • tell him/her about your skills and experience; • ask some questions related to work (wage, salary)

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My dear Sam, Hope you
are keep
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 well.I am
writting
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writing
 to you about my visit to Sydney .I am interested to come to Australia as you are already there
since
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 a long
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time
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 of your
india
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India
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 visit you were talking about people's life,job opportunity,
education
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and education
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of
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 Australia. I was excited to visit you but waiting
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 my final examination.
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 month my final result had come and I passed
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 a high
distingtion
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distinction
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mark
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. As you know I just completed my Master of education.I had
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 wish to go
to
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abroad and get
any
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 job and earn money and support my dream project of the Orphanage Center. Apart
of
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 My Educational qualification ,I have other skills and certificates
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 cookery.In the
biginging
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beginning
 If I am getting a job in a restaurant and earn some money and
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 I can go for my higher study as well. could you please make some inquiry about the wages of that restaurant which is near to your house as you
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 previously
.
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 Is there any vacancy there which will fit
with
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my qualification and experience
.
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How many hours can I work? and how to apply? I would appreciate
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 you can get some
lisure
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leisure
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 from your busy and make it.thanks for your understanding and support. Best Wishes Ranjit
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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