You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain the important event; apologise for the situation; suggest a new arrangement.

Hi Max How is it going?Hope that everything is fine.Sorry for answering so long I had a lot on my plate. Thank you again for your invitation,
however
, I have some bad news.My dad has broken his leg and
due to
this
now I must take care of him.Unfortunately,I have to postpone my visit to you.
However
,after 2 weeks he will be able to live without my help.
Hence
, I have a new chance to visit you.Of course,I still have to wait,
however
,I plan to book tickets tomorrow.In my ,opinion I will be in London by the summer festival,
due to
this
we will still have a whale of a time. Max,hope you got me right.Sorry about
this
occasion,I know that you have already booked tickets to the cinema,
however
, I think that you can still give them back. Looking forward to your answer.Take care of yourself.ergo
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