You're working overseas in an international company. You are leaving the country in emergency. Write a letter to your friends explaining the situation. In the letter, you should: • apologise for leaving like this • explain what happened • tell them what you're going to miss about working with them
Hi, Smith
I am writing to
apologizing
Wrong verb form
apologise
about
leaving our country. As you know overseas is Change preposition
for
great
way to me for achieve to my aims. Add an article
a great
That is
why I should leave our country emergency as new
company called me during the next 3 days.
About 3 Add an article
a new
month
ago I am writing to the manager of the company called "International Cargo" about working there. I think they Change to a plural noun
months
are value
my experience Change the verb form
value
that is
why they are called to me.
Now I am working here more
than 4 days and I want to inform you that I missed out Change preposition
for more
our
company because everyone Change preposition
on our
support
me when I have trouble.
I understand that it might be difficult for you to accept my apology, but I Change the verb form
supports
have
not any choice.
Yours faithfully,
Add a missing verb
do have
Mr.
GeorgeChange the punctuation
Mr
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The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
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