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You have been working in a company for three years, but now wish to leaving job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • What have you learned while working for the company • Did you enjoyed working there • What are your reasons for leaving the job

#company #three #years #job #manager
Dear Mr Kurra, I am writing to thank you for providing me with a job for 3 years. During
this
 period, I learned a lot in the field of
this
work
. To cite the example, how to attract buyers to your product, negotiate with larger companies. Аt that time, I made many friends who helped me with my
work
 when I was away. For illustration, when I had health problems or when I was
traveling
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travelling
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. I have many reasons to quit my job. The main reason for
this
 is that we moved to Russia and will now live here. And because of
this
, I cannot
work
 in Uzbekistan. Thanks for your understanding and I was happy to
work
 with you! Yours sincerely, Asadbek Ramazonov
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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