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In your opinion what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years? Support your opinion with reason and example from your own knowledge or experience.

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Transportation has been changed dramatically for 200 years. Availability to districts which were far away from us and travel with the minimum of
time
 was the first priority that humans had been faced with them, so it caused, humans persuaded to invent a variety of machines which were able to travel more easily than other old-fashioned ways.
Automobiles
, Trains, and Planes were invented and step by step they have been expanded with modern technologies that give us a safe trip and prevent
of
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waste of
time
. But if had to choose one of
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the invention
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invention
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is
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that is
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 more impressive than
others
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the others
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, I would say
Automobiles
.
Automobiles
was
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 the
basic
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of
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vehicle
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the vehicle
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 that other systems of transportation like train and plane had been inspired
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that
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. After the first
car
 was produced, around the world
manufactures
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 were established for making cars which have been converted
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 biggest industry in the world.
The
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time
 was passing in two previous centuries,
therefore
 cars could have gradually been so popular with people and almost the vast majority
people
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of people
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 might have bought at least
a
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car
. Literally,
Automobiles
 have affected efficiently on our life
that
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 separation of themselves will be impossible. Nowadays, people do a diversity of working by
car
.
For
example
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 go shopping, commuters go to work by
car
, and
also
goon
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go on
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a
trip
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,
,
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actually
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 life without
that is
 unimaginable.
Consequently
,
although
Automobiles
 are as not complicated as trains and planes, I believe
this
 vehicle is more beneficial than others. Cars give us
to
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spend shorter
time
 doing work, chores, and other activities, so we can mention the product is the most crucial innovation in the field of transportation.
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