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People today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on communities. What are the possible causes and solutions to this problem?

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There are a number of problems stemming from
this
 phenomenon and some solutions could be suggested to tackle
this
 issue. To start with the negative effects of less
interactive
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 with
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the neighborhood
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neighborhood
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, perhaps the most plausible one is that it
separate
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 people.
This
 probably derives from the fact that more and more individuals in
todays
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 era are
overly-occupied
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 with their tight working and studying schedules.
As a result
, they are not able to pay enough attention to family, society, environment and nurturance matters. In fact ,
a
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research has recently shown that the problem of isolation is receiving the least attention both from
government
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 and
people
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the people
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.
However
, a few measures can be taken to mitigate the problem of less
interacting
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 and improve the current situation
about
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this
 case. First of all, one of the most effective measures to remedy
this
 issue is that government can arrange campaigns in
school
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 and
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the workplace
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workplace
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 to alleviate all of the problems that are likely to result from less
interacting
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 can be solved and prevented from exacerbating. In conclusion , the problems that are caused by less
interacting
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 are both social and physical ,
however
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 they could be addressed by the collaborative action of both parents and
government
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the government
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.
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