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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays, working at
home
 has been realized. It is true that
people
 can use their private digital devices to deal with working tasks conveniently. The Internet has shown its great power, and I believe that online working from
home
have
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 more advantages, Working at
home
 is beneficial to boost the
effiency
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efficiency
 of employees. Commuting
time
 is saved and
people
 have longer
time
 for relaxation and preparing for the next day's
work
.
In addition
, they are not disturbed by office
distraction
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 and can pay more attention to
work
in
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the
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 hand It is
also
 easier for them to adjust their pace
according to
 the quality and quarterly
of
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working tasks. Working at
home
 makes it possible for
people
 to achieve
work-life
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 balance.
People
 are able to
doing
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 their
work
 and accompany their
family
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families
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 in the meantime. Especially for workers who have children,
they
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have more
time
 to educate their son or daughter in person, which is vital because parents are always
first
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educator
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. In spite of
this
,
people
 working at
home
 can receive
the
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support from their
family
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families
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 in return, which can help them get over the difficulties in their
work
. It has to admit that managers may be unwilling to allow their workers to
work
 online
,
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 because it is hard for managers to monitor workers’ performance.
However
,
this
 problem can be solved
through
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 asking workers to present
work
diary
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. In conclusion, my point of view is that the advantages of working at
home
 outweigh
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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. Not only will it increase
people
's motivation to
work
, but
also
 it provides
longer
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time
 for
people
 to stay with their family.
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