Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, students face
wide
variety of unpaid compulsory Add an article
a wide
programmes
at school
that they needed to compete before
moving forward. I strongly agree that these activities must be a part of Change preposition
in before
high
Correct article usage
the high
school
curriculum before graduation.
The first reason why unpaid compulsory subjects are important for younger
generationAdd an article
the younger
a younger
,
is that these Remove the comma
apply
programmes
build character. By engaging with
different kinds of learnings outside Change preposition
in
school
premises, they will gain experiences and skills that can be used for career growth. For example
, participating in a medical mission and working for a charity even unpaid will boost their moral
as a person. Correct your spelling
morale
Hence
, even at a younger age
they can be able to extend help to the needy and give love to the community without thinking Add a comma
,age
on
personal gain.
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about
Secondy
, young Correct your spelling
Secondly
people
will be able to meet many people
in their lives by volunteering to
various Change preposition
for
programmes
. Older people
may influence them to view the world in
Change preposition
from
different
perspective by teaching them to sacrifice time Add an article
a different
to
public Change preposition
for
service
. For instance
, an undergraduate pupil may join a senior club that teach
younger children on the streets to read and write. They may Correct subject-verb agreement
teaches
also
give a little of their money to give food to the poor and needy. By doing these services, students will be able to understand the true meaning of sacrifice and public service
.
In conclusion, I do believe that unpaid community service
must be part of high school
programmes
because it will develop the skills and experiences of pupils and widen their perspective in extending service
to needy people
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite