some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is apent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree ?

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system was too lag in having some practical experience at the early stage of school life which was
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given by most
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the pupil
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pupil
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. Nowadays,
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children
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learning ability is moving faster
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technology. The upcoming paragraphs
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statement. Generally, every tutorial management follows
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approach to the candidates rather than some advanced techniques.
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templet must be oriented into some practical system
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at lower primary class onwards the neo format get starts and make the children
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be more active. During
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section, if
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the teacher
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gives ideas
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of Internet to learn the
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students will motivate themselves to learn some skills
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, some private online products like BYJUS
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some
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how to learn
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subjects very fast and easily.
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part
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into
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structure, online lab
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with explanations,
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body system
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the children
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lunderstand
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understand
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, they create themselves
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a picture
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with more clarity. If these
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suppose
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came forward
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the student
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will learn
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with respect to topics as they reach
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level.
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, I am supporting
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the points given
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people. In conclusion, some practical
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new technology idea implementation could help the candidates to understand concepts related to
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.
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, I am totally agreeing with the statement.
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