The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
The line graph describes vehicle
theft
rates
measured in thousands in four different countries namely Britain, Sweden
, France
and Canada from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
, most of the transport are
stolen in Great Britain throughout the years. Change the verb form
is
However
, France
and Sweden
had fluctuations over the periods. Conversely
, Sweden
shows an upward trend.
With regards to the
Britain, at the start of the period, there Correct article usage
apply
was
nearly 17000 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
vechiles
Correct your spelling
vehicles
thefts
attempts are made. Later on, the Change the noun form
theft
theft
rates
increased steadily for three years and it attained its peak in 1993
After that, it faced a sudden decline around16000 by 1994. Likewise
, the rates
are starts to increase and peak
at 20000 in 1997. At Wrong verb form
peaked
last
, at the end
of the period although
it starts to decline it finished with a higher percentage of theft
rates
. Similarly
, Sweden
shows a gradual rise from the beginning of the year 1990 which is around 7000. It continues to increase till 1996 and after that, it remained in a steady state for further
two years as
13000. Change preposition
at
Finally
, it ends at 14000 in the year of
1999.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, Canada and France
were the countries with low
proportion of stolen vehicles.
In 1990, 6000 Add an article
a low
theft
incidents are noted in 1990 Canada. Similarly
, France
rate was 1 thousand lower in that same period. Both countries faced various trends. But, in the end, Both showed the same amount of 6000.Change noun form
France's
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