The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between march 1993 and march 1999

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line chart depicts the unemployed people ratio in two different countries: the United States and

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in March from 1994 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that, in

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country a massive number of unemployed workers. Accounting to what is shown,

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beginning in

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in the first period a tiny percentage of worker forces by 2.3.After that, the rate

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increased from 2.5 to 3.5 in three years from March .

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a drop in 1996 ,

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become fluctuate over three years. But between March 1998 and ,1999 the ratio of unemployment increased sharply

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of the period. In other countries the percentage of workers was 7.5 throughout the three years it has become from 7.0 to 5.5. After ,that the proportion drop in 1995 and 1998 was the same level in

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we could say that between 1998 to 1999

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country had the same period of unemployment 4.5 in the United States

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4.4 in

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