The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Information is presented by a bar chart which illustrates the survey’s outcome of individuals who bought
coffee
and tea
and their drinking behaviours in five different Australian cities
in the last
4weeks
. Correct your spelling
4 weeks
Overall
, it is evident that going to a cafe to have coffee
or tea
was the most common habit, except in Adelaide
. Additionally
, the percentage of people
buying instant coffee
was always higher than that of those purchasing fresh coffee
in all cities
.
In terms of Sydney and Melbourne, while
the proportion of Sydney’s people
drinking tea
or coffee
at a cafe was about 61%, the figure for Melbourne was slightly higher, at around 63%. Meanwhile, above 45% of citizens in Sydney and Melbourne had a habit of buying instant coffee
, whereas
the proportions of those purchasing fresh coffee
in these two cities
were around 44% and 43% respectively.
Moving on to the remaining cities
, having coffee
or tea
at a cafe accounted for the largest rate of people
in Hobart, followed by Brisbane and Adelaide
, at approximately 51% and 49% respectively. At the same time, around 53% of people
in Brisbane and Hobart chose to buy instant caffeine, compared to nearly 50% of those in Adelaide
. Finally
, a close similarity can be seen in the percentage of people
buying fresh caffeine in Brisbane and Adelaide
, at around 34%, while
Hobart’s figure was higher, at roughly 38%.Submitted by suthapuch1202 on
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