You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

Dear Sir My name is Peter. I was your customer. I'm writing to let you know that would be to improved and
also
given some points for advantages by your services.
Last
week, I travelled to Malaysia with my friends and make a hotel reservation
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March. The room would have two beds and full equipment as a studio apartment. The room was on floor 7 and upward having a bar. But we just came to your country for taking a rest and hearing some noise from the bar. I would like to get some feedback to increase your facilities.
Besides
,that I will give you some high points about the hotel.
Firstly
, the place is fit for us. But when night comes, the bar is making some noise from above my room, I think you need to build
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soundproofed wall to prevent some noise.
Secondly
, the food and beverage are delicious and your staffs are kind to serve
this
.
Finally
, the parking of car was crowded and hardly find a spot to parking and I think you need to expand spaces for car parking. I hope you consider some points I mentioned. I'm forward to hearing from you. If you have any questions and feel free to ask me questions. Thanks and regards Peter
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