You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other.you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter •say which points in the article you agree with .explain ways in which your town center is different from most other centers •offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer or f the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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to express my concern regarding the article published in the

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centre of Ahmedabad in Time of India on 28th January. I agree with the point that it is old and has been the same for years.

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, despite being old, it has a very well-planned sewage system. You will not notice water congestion even in heavy rain. Unfortunately,

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lacks in other

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centres.

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the roads are narrow, you will hardly notice the traffic congestion even in the peak hours because of its unique traffic management system

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other

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centres always struggle with the traffic when it comes to the peak hours.

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, I would like to offer to give you a guided tour to the writer of the article so that he finds the unique quality of the heart of the

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. I can be reached at my email [email protected] for

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discussion on

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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Kishan

Submitted by kishanpatel2550 on Sat Mar 04 2023

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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