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The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the daily consumption of three spreads per person from 1981 to 2007 in a country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph compares the
amount
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 of three spreads (
margarine
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, low fat and reduced spreads and
butter
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) usage between 1981 and 2007. The units are measured in
grams
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.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that the
amount
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 of
margarine
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 and
butter
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 decreased dramatically throughout the period,
although
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 low fat and reduced spreads increased,
whereas
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 the use of
this
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spread
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 started in 1996. Looking at the graph it can be seen that, the
consumption
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 of
butter
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 was higher that the two other spreads. The
amount
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 of
butter
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 consumed was just over 140
grams
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 in 1981, before reaching a peak at just below 160
grams
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 in 1986. After that,
butter
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consumption
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 plummeted and reached well below 60
grams
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 in 2007. In terms of the usage of
margarine
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, the
amount
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 of
margarine
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 was well below 100
grams
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 in 1981;
however
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, it dropped to 80
grams
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 in 1986. In the following 5 years, after rising gradually to 100
grams
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, the
consumption
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 of
margarine
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 remained stable from 1991 to 1996. The figure for
margarine
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 plunged to 40
grams
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 and become the lowest consumed
spread
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 in 2007. Regarding low fat and reduced
spread
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consumption
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, it started in the year 1996, at around 20
grams
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. The figure for low fat and reduced spreads reached a high at just over 80
grams
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, before dipping slightly in the final year, at just below 80
grams
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,
while
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 it was the highest consumed
spread
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 in the year 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, margarine, butter, grams, spread, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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