some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Generally, Most people think that the main way to be happy
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growth is to have a lot of capital. I will be emphasizing how a lot of
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can make people happy.
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, being able to afford anything you want, and
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for respect. And I will
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any other person happy with certain points.
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as falling in love, ceremonies like, graduation, wedding, giving birth, and being successful in your career. From the beginning of time, everyone knows that having
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brings happiness. when we are talking about living
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to our expectations, going to places we want to be, going on expensive trips, and getting the best medical attention overseas,
that is
another level of being happy. And
also
for respect and dignity.
besides
everyone knows wealth is the power to some ground.
However
, they are other ways in existence to make each other happy. when we talk of falling in love, most individuals feel falling in love is another happiness on its own and the best feelings anyone ever gets. when it comes to ceremonies of heart
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graduation, successful birth after going through hard labour, wedding and so on.
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, there's
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saying health is wealth. In conclusion, the point of having lots of
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for happiness and other ways to be happy has been justified with some reasons stated above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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