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As many
people
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nowadays prefer eating
food
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that comes from different
countries
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and regions more than locally grown
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,
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food
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products nowadays travel long distances before being bought and eaten.
Although
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having more options enriches the diet of contemporary
people
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with new tastes and unusual sources of macronutrients, it
also
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affects
both
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our
health
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and the environment negatively. In
this
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essay, we’ll study
both
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benefits
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and downsides of
this
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trend
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to see if it is worth moving our
food
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so far away before it reaches the end consumer. One of the primary
benefits
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of having
food
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from different parts of the world on our plates is the opportunity to experience diverse cultures and tastes. It helps
people
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to learn more about different
countries
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and get interested in new cultures and even
traveling
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to new places at some point.
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, Lebanese restaurants, opened by immigrants, make western
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try
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cuisne
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cuisine
, become accustomed to it and become more tolerant
to
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of
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foreign
culture
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cultures
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in general at the same time.
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that, having ingredients from abroad might help
people
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with special dietary needs in some situations as they have broader
choice
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choices
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and access to unusual
food
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elements and
food
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supplements
this
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way that might be better for their
health
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.
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,
kinoa
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quinoa
, which is a perfect source of vegetable protein, is imported from South America to all
countries
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in the world and
serve
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serves
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well in the nutrition plans for
people
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with
diabetis
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diabetes
. Despite these
benefits
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, a couple of serious drawbacks
makes
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make
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the
trend
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of long-distance
traveling
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food
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quite problematic.
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of the issues is
traveling
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itself. Working as a whole, all the
countries
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are trying to reduce C02 emissions, at the same time, moving
food
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from one country to another which jeopardizes
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goal.
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, for transportation purposes, fruits from overseas,
such
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as bananas and apples, are often harvested before they
are ripen
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and are subjected to gas to make them ripe at the point of destination. Many
researches
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prove that to affect negatively digestion of the end consumers. That’s why when we’re talking about
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green produce, at any given moment, eating locally grown apples will be better
both
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for
environment
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the environment
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and
health
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. In conclusion, the
trend
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of consuming more international
food
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and cuisine has
both
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advantages and disadvantages.
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it provides an opportunity for
people
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to experience diverse cultures and tastes, it
also
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has the potential to contribute to environmental impact and be harmful
for
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consumers’
health
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.
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, the
benefits
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for individuals do not pay off the potential drawbacks for our planet. If the
trend
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of buying
food
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overseas will become less popular in the future, it will help humankind build a more sustainable economy.
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  • pollution
  • deter
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  • lower-income individuals
  • public transport
  • availability
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